The latest
extract from Life-Writes …
People Watching
Nothing we
take on board during our daily routine is ever wasted if we are writers,
although this doesn’t always mean things that happen to us personally, because
few of us live life in the fast lane. Quite a large number of those
‘happenings’ that are of use to us will have involved other people and so we
have to learn to become an avid people-watcher – in other words, a snoop! We
watch, listen, spy and eavesdrop in order to collect ideas to convert into the
written word. Just as we learnt to take notice of everything that happens on
our patch, so we extend our awareness to people, what they do, how they react,
body language, etc. Whenever we leave the house and travel to work each day, we
have plenty of opportunity for people watching but what happens if we happen to
be house-bound, or work from home? In that case we watch life by proxy.
All serious
writers should take a daily newspaper because this, more often than not, will
stimulate the creative processes on a mundane level. Newspaper stories and
articles will give you the true human angle, because these are the real-life
dramas that sell newspapers. And what better gauge of public interest than the
daily scandal-rags or broadsheets?
Listen to
conversations going on in public places and jot down what you hear. This is a
great source of one-liners, even if the rest of the conversation is missed, or
contains nothing of interest. Just as importantly, listen to how people
say things and express themselves, because this can provide added depth to your
character without resorting to long, wordy descriptions. Colloquialisms and
similes, especially those of a regional or localised nature can convey volumes
if used in the correct context and dispense with the urge to attempt to write
in dialect.
People
watching is the writer’s fuel for good ideas.
Body Language & Gestures
What we
generally refer to as ‘body language’ is someone’s unconscious reaction to a
situation or person. People watching adds a whole new dimension to the way
individuals react to one another and, like a picture, can easily convert into
1,000 words of narrative. The married couple who do and say all the right
things, and yet their body language may give off conflicting signals at variance
with the outward show of domestic bliss. Or the pretty, well-turned out child
that does not appear relaxed in the company of a step-parent. Or the dog that
refuses to respond to a particular visitor’s overtures. Each reaction can be
detected in body language.
Gestures also
tend to be an unconscious reaction to situations or people, and usually involve
making some symbolic movement of the hand. Some are comparatively modern, while
others can be traced back hundreds of years, but as Desmond Morris points out
in his book, Gestures, this is a
form of visual slang and just as slang words go out of fashion, so can
gestures. Body language and gestures can be used as a ‘conflict’ device so
essential to fiction writing, as a cause of misunderstanding, or the give-away
in a thriller.
The
observation that too many people go through life never looking around at what’s
actually going on in their immediately vicinity. A writer needs to realise the
importance of taking the ‘time to stand and stare’ because this is the only way
to add to the inner retrieval system of our cerebral ‘zip file’. We must learn
to observe in order to be able to record what we see and to be able to retrieve
this information when we sit down to write. Because there really is a story,
article or poem behind
everything we encounter during our daily routine.
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Accept
the fact that writers are, without a doubt, vampiric creatures, in that
they can only exist by sucking the life out of any situation or encounter, and
it using to further their own writing careers.
Handy Hint:
People-watching
provides us with additional material to use to develop characterisation and the
obvious expert on the subject is undoubtedly Desmond Morris. His books, The Human
Zoo, The Naked Ape, Manwatching, Intimate
Behaviour
and Gestures not only
provide hours of entertainment but also plenty of background information about
human body language. At least one of these titles should be among a writer’s
reference collection but they should not be used as substitutes for the real
thing, i.e. personal observation. Second hand copies are usually readily
available on www.ABE-Books.com
Try This Exercise:
Take a copy
of your regular daily national newspaper and mark each of the items that arouse
your interest. Cut them out and keep them in files, together with any
comments/ideas you might have for future writing projects. As the collection
builds you will find that certain subjects occur more and more frequently;
others were just a passing whim. Go through this collection every couple of
months to stimulate ideas if you’re feeling uninspired. Throw away any
clippings that no longer interest you. Use this opportunity to jot down ideas
for:
• A short
story
• An article
• A poem